Hi, Amanda! I thought that was a great story. You write really well in first person. I thought the reference to "bleeding out" was especially fitting for how the character was feeling. And then in the end the readers realize that Pamela was stalking Gary and his new girlfriend... brrrr... It would be interesting to see a sequel story to this one.
I actually meant it to be more of a chilling story than it ended up being, but once Pamela got talkin'... well, you know, characters tend to take over :)
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Hi, Amanda! I thought that was a great story. You write really well in first person. I thought the reference to "bleeding out" was especially fitting for how the character was feeling. And then in the end the readers realize that Pamela was stalking Gary and his new girlfriend... brrrr... It would be interesting to see a sequel story to this one.
I actually meant it to be more of a chilling story than it ended up being, but once Pamela got talkin'... well, you know, characters tend to take over :)
Thanks for the positive feedback!
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